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📩 1-man Email Agency | B2B + B2C | Set-up>>Strategy>>Sales.

Puns work when: - They suit the brand's tone of voice - They're unexpected, rather than clichéd - They don't lean on an awkward change in pronunciation - They ACTUALLY connect all the right aspects of the brief - The phrase works on its own, but the wordplay enhances it. Take this bit of banner copy for example. The product = pancakes (you know, the things you flip). The brand/service = ultrafast grocery delivery, meaning you can get pancakes (or pancake ingredients) within minutes of ordering them. Same-day shipping = an actual phrase. "Order for same-day flipping" works whether you realise it's a pun or not, but when you do realise it's a pun, it makes it more fun and thought-provoking, and gives you a nice little brain tingle. Trust me, I wrote it. P.S. it's Pancake Day today btw. You're welcome.

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James Newell

B2B founder? Hard to explain offering? Go from CONFUSION to CONVERSION with a Clear Sales Message™

9mo

This is the first pancake related post I've seen today - I was telling my wife I hadn't seen any. She said people have to do batter. This actually happened. 🙄

Katie Skelton

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9mo

"Trust me, I wrote it" 😂

Mj Faulkner 👶

A baby in marketing | Digital Marketing Apprentice who has FUN | 3x Top Voice Badge | Living, learning and CONSTANTLY sharing

9mo

I can't believe it's pancake day already... It's proper crepe'd up on me!

Luca Kozina 🐝

Website copywriter for women coaches, consultants and creatives looking for value-aligned clients | Fiction writer

9mo

Brilliant!

Nicky Short

Creative Copywriter. Content Generator. Story Smith.

9mo

Nice one! Also, thanks for the reminder about pancake day. Now, i wonder where I could get ingredients at this late notice....

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Dan Bentley

I help freelancers & founders sell their services confidently | Mindset & Mental Performance Coaching

9mo

Flippin’ brilliant insights as always Oli

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