Worth reading from NiemanLab: Readers prefer to click on a clear, simple headline — like this one By David Markowitz, Hillary Shulman and Todd Rogers In an era when people trust news less than ever, how can journalists break through and attract the attention of average people to provide information about their communities, the nation and the world? By not complicating things. Our research, published in Science Advances, shows that simple headlines significantly increase article engagement and clicks compared with headlines that use complex language. In our research, typical news readers preferred simple headlines over complex ones. But importantly, we found that those who actually write headlines — journalists themselves — did not. We first used data from The Washington Post and Upworthy to see how language features, such as word length and how common a word is, changed how many people clicked on an article’s headline. These datasets included over 31,000 randomized experiments — also known as A/B tests — that compared two or more headline versions of the same underlying article to determine which one generated the most clicks. Headlines with more common words — simple words like “job” instead of “occupation” — shorter headlines, and those communicated in a narrative style, with more pronouns compared with prepositions, received more clicks. For example, The Washington Post headline, “Meghan and Harry are talking to Oprah. Here’s why they shouldn’t say too much” outperformed the alternative headline, “Are Meghan and Harry spilling royal tea to Oprah? Don’t bet on it.” This example illustrates how sometimes a more straightforward headline can generate more interest. In follow-up laboratory experiments, we found that typical news readers focused more on simple rather than complex headlines because the writing was easier to understand. When journalists participated in the same experiments, they didn’t show any preference for simple headlines over complex ones. Put differently: Those who write the news appear to be less responsive to simple writing than regular audiences. Generations of communication consultants have advised that communicators follow the rather crass acronym KISS: Keep it Simple, Stupid. We suggest a modified version applied for journalists. Since KISJ isn’t all that simple, we propose: Keep It Simple, Staffers. Simplicity increases the number of people who click on a news story headline and improves reader recall of the material in the article. Most importantly, simplicity boosts reader engagement, such as how much attention they pay to the information.
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Great advice. Listening to the audience is essential for news organizations to earn trust with communities.
A friend urged me to "do a post about how we can communicate our frustration with the press." Write a letter to the editor? What else? "Do they even care?" she asked. So here goes: tips, thoughts, and an invitation to add. If you're a working journalist, how does feedback happen at your outlet? If you've given feedback to a publication, how'd it go? Good journalists care deeply about their work, and the best listen to feedback. But news orgs almost all make it difficult for readers/viewers to weigh in with criticism, suggestions or compliments. And almost no publications have audience advocates any more: The New York Times eliminated its public editor in 2017 and offers (as far as I can see) no channels for audience feedback to news leaders (gift link in comments). Is canceling a subscription the only option for voicing dissatisfaction? Isn't there some way to be heard, especially as newsrooms turn to audiences for support to keep going? To answer my friend's question, I spent a day going through news sites I use to see how you'd do it. I hit a lot of dead ends, but here are some things to try: * Direct feedback to journalists: Many outlets offer email links from the reporter's name/byline, directory or profile, on websites and also in email newsletters. This feedback is probably more effective if it's constructive and specific. * Letters to the editor: Newspapers still publish them, and the good ones make it easy to see how to submit (link to Washington Post example in comments). * Complaints or suggestions to newsroom leaders: Get your scrolling finger ready. Most sites have some kind of "contact" or "About" link, but they're often at the bottom of web pages and several clicks back. But if you're motivated, make the effort and send the feedback to the contact for the news department — look for the news director or top editor listed. * Posting comments on outlets' social media: Civil, specific posts probably have the biggest chance of being heard: "Here's what I missed. Here's where I think you fell short. Here's what I loved." About those news site dead ends. I don't get it: Journalism, more than ever, needs support and the confidence of its audiences, and giving them a way to connect and communicate seems like Step 1. In an age when "About" and "Contact" are basic elements of any organizational or personal website, some news outlets don't have them at all and most bury them. "About" pages often are promotional more than helpful, and many deal with business functions (advertising, subscriptions, etc.) without any links to submit news feedback or questions. Contrast this with the "Trust Kit" on audience feedback (link in comments) offered by the wonderful organization Trusting News, led by Joy Mayer. Social platforms don't prioritize news and have backed away from fighting misinformation, even sharing links is clumsy. Still, social posts reach people. Especially for local and state news, feedback might even have an impact.
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Journalists should not be mistaken for experts. I’m not saying a reporter can’t have deep and specific knowledge. Most actually do. Everyone I meet in Journalists Club, for instance, has expertise on their beat. The pitfall comes when journalists position themselves as experts, as if the job title alone means they (we) know what they’re talking about. That changes the gig and misses the mark. Without humility, it’s harder to keep curiosity as the North Star. The best reporters I’ve met are those who are comfortable with how little they know. Any expertise a journalist may glean from reporting should be in service of translating and communicating — not moralizing or grandstanding. Semafor, for one, is great at differentiating between a reporter’s opinion and the facts. It’s helpful and transparent. But this practice isn’t the norm. It’s not unusual for legacy outlets to blend reporting and opinion without clarifying what’s what. And one consequence of putting “spin” on a story is the suspicion of future spin. To that point, Gallup data shows Americans’ trust in media is at record lows. For me, I’d like to believe I have a solid grasp on markets and investing after several years covering Wall Street. But I’d never say I’m a financial expert. I do my best to allow the gaps in my own knowledge to guide my reporting, rather than what I think I already know. I learned this working with great editors Max Adams and Jason Ma at Business Insider. The best stories come from good questions. The best questions spring from blind spots, not certainties. Some things I aim for when I write: → Interrogate all assumptions → Let readers draw their own conclusions → Communicate, rather than dictate → Meet readers where they stand (or, don’t write from the Ivory Tower) It’s not as if the profession comes with some intellectual high ground. If being a journalist meant being an expert, it would blur the meaning of even-handed reporting. And that’s just not the gig.
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This is a perfect example of why public servants have an inherent distrust of the media. Stephenie Price was selected after a nationwide search by a top national recruiting firm that yielded 94 applicants. The selection process included input from citizens, city council and staff members. There are so many other headlines that could have accompanied this story that could have been positive and uplifting, or at the very least, neutral, for example: - Price will be appointed Beaufort’s first female police chief; or - Price selected from 94 applicants to be Beaufort’s next chief; or - Price edges tough competition for Beaufort’s top police job; or - Internal candidate selected; Price will be Beaufort’s next Chief. But instead, the Island Packet defaults to a negative spin on a headline to resurrect a tired narrative so they can continue selling clicks. To say I am disappointed is an understatement, but to say I am surprised would be patently false. In my 15 years of public service in the Lowcountry, I have come to accept this type of trash journalism as the norm from this media outlet. The nature of the headline expressing that “Former Bluffton Police chief gets 2nd chance,” to me, implies that she was fired from a previous chief’s position. This is something upon which Robert York, an editor the Island Packet, and I disagree. I know, because we have spoken, and the conversation was not pleasant. The fact that one of their editors fails to see the headline for what it is, or will admit to what it is, should tell one all they need to know about the Island Packet’s bias. My unsolicited advice is that the editorial staff spend less time on clickbait headlines and more time on proofing copy. This particular story, like most, was ridden with misspellings and typos.
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"Simple headlines significantly increase article engagement and clicks compared with headlines that use complex language," say a team of researchers who tracked 31,000 A/B tests and gauged readers vs journalists' preferences. https://lnkd.in/e7XUPpEW
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I really like reading all the trend reports and expert predictions this time of year. Some are duh, some are meh, some are WOW! The latter really get your 🤔 going and the contributions collected by Nieman Journalism Lab in their "Predictions for Journalism, 2025." list are all in the WOW level. WOW is not attained on the agreeing or disagreeing level. It is attained by sending your #criticalthinking into action! Here are a few that most stood out to me. While they are focused on journalism, they all, IMO, apply as much and in some cases more, to all #StrategicCommunication. 👏 to all below and in the full list! “We’ve overindexed on problem articulation, to the point of problem admiring. The risk is that we are analyzing ourselves into inaction and irrelevance.” - Meredith Artley “For too long, science journalism has been treated as something distinct, something extra — the domain of specialists writing for audiences who are already deeply interested in and informed about science. This is bad.” - Siri Carpenter “For news organizations looking to stay relevant in a rapidly evolving digital landscape, exploring these platforms isn’t just about finding new distribution channels – it’s about building the foundation for future AI-powered news experiences.” - Ethan Toven-Lindsey “We must rise to this challenge with Kendrick-like precision: thoughtful, impactful, and unapologetic. Writing — our craft’s core — must be sharper, richer, and distinctive.” - Delano Massey “Journalists can fall into a trap of parroting the language provided by officials, whether that’s law enforcement, the courts, politicians, academics, or subject-matter experts.” - Doris Truong “In a world where GenAI presents itself as the solution, we will return to the social sciences, Humanities, and even old-style journalism.” - Daniel Trielli “The key is inviting everyone who touches a story from beginning to end to be a part of the conversation.” - Kendall Trammell “The standalone Audience team/department/function, as we know it, is dead.” - Ryan Y. Kellett https://lnkd.in/eFm_yeCM
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