Fix your problem.
Ask someone special…or three special people.
If you want to solve a problem, ask the right person. When it came to writing my first screenplay, Trophies, I initially needed screenwriting advice. Lucky for me, I had the good fortune of the booming encouragement of my neighbour, who just so happened to be Hollywood actor, Christopher Malcolm. I seemed to bump in to Chris every time I went to my little Ford Fiesta and he was limping to his giant Jag. He was always asking how my writing was going. As soon as I had a draft, he offered to read it.
Gulp!
I sat with him in his office and got grilled. Chris boomed, ‘it reads like radio!’
He did love many of the characters and thought it had a good premise.
Second draft then yes?
Actually, no. What happened was twofold; a friend of my mother’s told me rather scathingly, I needed to ‘live a bit’ before writing. How could I possibly know anything about life at 25! I told myself I could rewrite it in my spare time, but with a student loan to pay off, I ended up putting scriptwriting aside to pursue corporate filmmaking. I hated my mother’s friend for what she said at the time, but in hindsight, she was right. I had ideas, but needed those tough life lessons and experience to really make this story come alive.
Fast forward to 2019 when we were all struck by Covid. After a lot of jump rope, I dusted off the old vomit draft and told myself I could surgically fix my first, little Frankenscript. I fixed up a new draft, tweaked it and thought I was on to something. A Cameraman friend put me in touch with BBC producer Tony McHale, and to my surprise, he kindly reviewed my third draft. In short, the script now had, according to Tony, too many characters, and enough content for several books… so I really took stock and looked at refining the story.
Through LinkedIn, I shared connections with feature film script mentor Dr Alex Ross and over several revisions, I refocused the story and developed my protagonist.
With all this great advice, I knew I had to be careful or I would suffer from analysis/paralysis. I considered what I had learned from these professionals and let that guide my creativity and story finessing. What I felt most strongly was a shift in perspective in the story and decided that a new name would better reflect the themes and journey my protagonist was taking and so renamed Trophies to The Compromise.
Once I had my manuscript complete and spent some time letting the last few ideas emerge, I employed a professional proofreader check over the final work and type set it. Thank you to Joe Barnes for his efforts in this regard.
I feel incredibly grateful to have been able to engage with these exceptionally talented people. Getting the right help has me learn new skills and explore my creativity and develop my story. If you are interested in reading my first novel, The Compromise is available on Amazon.
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