Aaiye, Ek Naya Ghar Banate Hain.

Aaiye, Ek Naya Ghar Banate Hain.

Good Morning, Dosto.

I woke up this morning, with a reminder from FB that, it may have been a year from when I posted my first 'nazm-numa-item'. In the last year, I've received much more than I deserve from everyone, for which I am grateful. I'm also grateful to other writers and poets who send me their Kalaam and Videos regularly for my inputs.

Here's what came to my mind on waking up today: 

'Ghar' to me is usually not a place. Its how I feel about someone or someplace. For example, I'm quite at 'home' on the road. I'm at 'home' with TaritSandeepAnamikaJimmySarikaInder , SnehiNikhilAmbarPallaviNidhiNehaLakshyaAmit and other people that I can endlessly chat with.

I also want to strongly recommend to people that they identify what they feel at 'home' with and secure it. Experiences, people, even things (if they matter...example our bikes :) ).

So here's the start to a new Nazm, that I invite all of us to contribute to. If you can extend it and have an idea, by all means, write in the same vein. Or leave a note for someone else to make poetic sense out of. Any which way, this would be a nazm that we will then all own.

Hope you are at 'home' with the idea and thank you so much for contributing. Here are the idea-starter lines:

Aaiye, ek naya ghar banate hain,

Ehsaason ki garmaahat se, deewaren chunwaate hain...

Aaiye, ek naya ghar banate hain.

We will credit everyone, who adds even a word to this endeavor. and publish this through the The Ambar Kharbanda Project, Or www.ArtToHeart.in 

Aaiye, ek naya ghar banate hain.

अाऔ घर बनाते हैे। शाम ढल गई अपने घर जाते है । अपनाे कि आँखों में रहकर संवर जाते हैं। आज कि दर-ब-दर ठोकरें अपनो से बया करते है। बया करते करते महसूस करते है, घर किसे कहते हैं । अाओ घर बनाते हैे।

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Sardar Ali Sayed

Committed to Crafting Remarkable Experiences 🌟 | Experienced Event Marketing Professional | Expert in Audience Acquisition Delivery (RSVP & Response Management) | Poet & Writer | Co-Author - 'Golden Stars & Dusk & Dawn'

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Har zalim ko maar bhagao, mazloomo ke hafiz bankar Rab ne jab Insaan banaya, Insaa'n hi ban jate hai.. Aaiye, ek naya ghar banate hai

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Vineet K. K. N. 'Panchhi'

An empathetic society that takes decisive action; gives rise to heroes. | Dil Ho, Dard Ho, Dava Ho...Zindagi Ho, Jeene Ki Wajah Ho

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Thank You, Dosto. I wanted to give this a few days, and see what people can do together, and I must say I am humbled and honoured by your participation. We will now take this back to our team of Ambar Kharbanda Saab, Pallavi Misra Chaturvedi, and Nidhi Anand, to collate all the wonderful poetry we have so far received, and present the result to Mr. Deepak Khetrapal. We will keep a track of who gave us what lines, and if any of your work gets chosen to be part of the overall Nazm, you are sure to hear from us with our best wishes and acknowledgement. Thank you again. 

Puneet Juneja

Customer service leader || CS strategy & execution || Field Service || Contact Centre || Service Revenue || B2B & B2C || Cost Optimisation || Service Automation || Tata Sky || Jumbo || LG || Airtel || Whirlpool || Bose|

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आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं I नेक इरादों पे नीव एक टिकाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II अर्श बिछा हो जहाँ फ़र्श पर, ऐसी रगड़ाई करवाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II ताले वो जो बंदिशे खोलें, किवाड़ ऐसे लगवाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II पारदर्शी छत से सपनों को अंदर बुलवाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II जहाँ बर्तनों की मधुर तान हो, रसोई ऐसी बनवाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II जितने पर्व उतने रंगों से दीवारें सजाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II जीवन की हर इक ऋतुओं में, अडिग रहे जो, चौखट ऐसी लगवाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II अश्रु रुकें न जिस आँगन में, ढलान ऐसी बनवाते हैं II आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II नए विचारों की बोली हो जिसमे, ऐसी घंटी लगवाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II रिश्तों में गर्माहट रखे, चुलाह ऐसा इक जलाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II नैतिकता रहे सुरक्षित जिसमें, संदूक ऐसा इक लाते हैं I आइये, एक नया घर बनाते हैं II

Bhupinder Gogia

Principal at Sat Paul Mittal School

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Rishtu ke mithas se, esae hum sajathe hai Aaiye ek naya ghar banaate hain

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