AWARENESS
THE MIND TRYING TO FIND AWARENESS BY LORI HAMMOND

AWARENESS


"ANGELS

WHERE ARE YOU I AM SO ______FOR YOU"...

TRANSCEND EMOTION

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SHE gets up fixes her skirt the couch had crumpled while she laid relaxed.

The DARK SILHOUETTE by the gold curtains stood motionless except for the smoke streaming out the slightly opened window. The day was bright but the room itself had a contrast of dark shadow with the deepest hue of black and yet

there, ...over there slightly

beautiful blinding gold light from the curtains and window the contrast was dramatic and gorgeous. She could also see the deep greens of the woods near the window and all around really; she had always loved the darkness of the dense trees and the little stream, if quiet you could hear at night that was not too far.

She had a feeling of something "forgotten"

the smoke streaming closer now and the smell of deep ember burning she says "I am going now" all the while the dark silhouette remaining motionless.

The swirls now sparkle with the rays of sun and somehow seem to bring in little rainbows dancing like glitter onto the dusty antique desk and beautiful mahogany of the interior space, she inserts "NOW" then turns.


She feels breathing on her neck as she heads to the door it is warm, her hand reaching out ... and then she, is outside into the blinding light.

her mind racing, she has her keys in hand and she hears the gravel of the road, then there is a sudden, ringing. ALL SOUND STOPS except this RINGGG she faulters but her body is in momentum and continues heading toward the jeep it starts with a growl that sounds like rebellion wonderful.

At this moment her hair tousled in a shaggy style loosely thrown up, her look determined yet soft.

a steal underneath perhaps it was too early to know but she did know something

WHAT, WHAT DID SHE KNOW

that she could write a different story that she could add details and take away that she could spin and weave and spell

perhaps, but what she did know

is a deep love a deep feeling of respect cause just now

in freedom she felt aware

...the RINNNNNNGGGG

the rainbows and sparkling smoke inside the golden dark room


To be continued...

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