Writing a PEE paragraph

A paragraph is an interconnected set of sentences that focus on and support a single idea. A PEE paragraph is a way of structuring information in a series of connected sentences. PEE stands for:

·  POINT

·  EXAMPLE/EVIDENCE

·  EXPLANATION

The L in PEEL stands for LINK.

Think of paragraphs as part of a hierarchy of information. Think of this hierarchy as having the following three levels in a pyramid:

1.     Sentence – The basic component of information - a grammatical unit that contains a single piece of information.

2.     Paragraph – A collection of sentences that conveys an idea. A paragraph combines the many individual pieces of information to convey a complex idea.

3.     Essay – A series of paragraphs that present information about a complex idea.

A PEE/PEEL paragraph presents information in a clearly structured manner. The sentences work together as follows:

1.     Point – The first sentence introduces the idea or thing you will discuss. This is your topic sentence.

2.     Example – The second sentence should include an example, or piece of evidence – that supports your point

3.     Explanation – The third sentence explains why the piece of evidence supports your point

4.     Link – This is a sentence that connects your paragraph with a wider argument, such as a complete essay. The linking sentence will often explain why you think the piece of evidence is important.

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Is legal aid collapsing? 

Read the following article extract, written in 2023. It explains that there are two serious problems with legal aid. First, eligibility is limited. Second, there is a shortage of legal aid lawyers – who earn a lot less than privately paid lawyers.  

The legal aid sector is collapsing and millions more may soon be without access to justice – new data 

The UK government has announced changes to legal aid access in England and Wales. Under these changes, the government estimates that over 2 million more people will be eligible for civil legal aid each year. Eligibility, though, is not the same as access. The reality is that fewer and fewer people have access to civil legal aid advice and representation, because provision is collapsing. 

Civil legal aid covers issues like housing, mental health, community care, immigration and asylum, and family law. The scope of these was much reduced by austerity measures in the Legal Aid, Sentencing and Punishment of Offenders (LASPO) Act 2012. 

There was a 20% reduction in the number of housing legal aid providers in the 18 months to March 2023. The same period saw a 21% loss of legal aid providers for mental health, and a 27% loss in welfare benefits. In immigration and asylum, over 30% of the providers given contracts in September 2018 had stopped doing legal aid work by March 2023. 

Providers (private law firms or charities) are given contracts by the Legal Aid Agency to provide legal aid in specific areas of law – but they cannot be compelled to take on cases. 

In fact, the current situation is worse than even these figures suggest, because 30% of the housing provider offices (129) did not undertake any new legal aid cases in the year to 31 August 2022. Often, this is because they are unable to recruit any qualified lawyers on the salaries available, or because they cannot afford to take on legal aid cases. Others take on very small numbers of cases because they are at capacity, given the number of lawyers they can afford. 

A housing lawyer described having so much demand at her firm that they have to allocate a senior solicitor to triage the most desperate cases, turning away the rest. 

There is a clear regional inequality to provision of legal aid. For example, the Legal Aid Agency failed to find any providers at all for 11 areas to deliver its new, court-based early advice scheme to prevent housing loss. 

Civil legal aid fees have not increased at all since fixed fees were introduced for most work in 2007, and have fallen significantly in real terms. There is also a huge amount of unpaid admin and bureaucracy imposed by the Legal Aid Agency.  

If the UK government fails to ensure the viability and availability of legal aid, there will be no more lawyers to provide advice and representation for millions of newly-eligible (and desperately needy) people. This is what happens when legal aid is cut too far. The system survives for a period of time on goodwill, and then it collapses.  (Wilding, 2023) 

PEE paragraph

Write a paragraph using the PEE structure, explaining the point that people who are eligible for legal aid may not be able to access a legal solicitor.  

There are many ways you could explain and evidence this point, using the information in the article.

Example

Point: People who are eligible for legal aid may not be able to access a legal solicitor.  

Explanation: There is a shortage of legal aid solicitors in many areas.  

Evidence: For housing law, 30% of offices did not take on new clients in 2022-23. In 11 areas, providers could not be found for a new court-based advice scheme.