I reviewed a B2B SaaS startup's pitch deck and noticed a critical flaw. Here's how we fixed it and landed major funding. A few months ago a friend of mine referred me to a startup that was struggling to get pre-seed funds. After looking through the deck and talking to the core founders, I understood why: ❌ The deck was too long ❌ Had too much information ❌ And lacked the number 1 thing that people like: a compelling story You might say we aren’t writing essays… And you’d be right! We are condensing and relaying key information, «hooking» people into the pitch. And the only way to do that is to bypass logic, Going straight for the emotional brain. And stories are hardwired to do just that. So after taking a few days to talk to the founders some more, here’s what happened: ✅ The value proposition of the product was refined ✅ The deck was only a SUPPORTING asset, not the main star of the show ✅ And was structured in a way to tell a compelling story of why the product matters, who will use it, and why this is bound to work Plus by weaving existing social proof (micro-stories), relaying that back to the strengths of the team and a bit of thinking… The team was put in front of a few investors. Suffice to say the investors were impressed. --- P.S: Want to know how to acquire more B2B SaaS customers for less? DM me "SaaS" - Ilian
Sounds interesting, Ilian Daviaud! As they say, “The art of communication is the language of leadership.” Your approach to refining the pitch deck and focusing on storytelling truly embodies this.
Aye stories connect deeper :)
Great insight! It's important to focus on telling a compelling story in your pitch deck.
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6moAdding (preferably tested) distribution/acquisition channels also helps.