15 Steps to Write Like the Masters—How to Keep Readers Hooked Forever

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I got into marketing because I wanted to be a writer—and because I was tired of cold calling for sales.

I hated reading and writing growing up. They were my worst subjects in school. My parents tried to bribe me to read, but I wouldn’t do it. Things started to change in college, almost by sheer force. I had to read hundreds of pages a week to keep up, and what do you know, I started to enjoy it.

Then I read Malcolm Gladwell’s Blink.

I was hooked. No matter how tired I was, I always wanted to read the next paragraph.

Why?

What makes someone want to read the next paragraph? And how could I make that happen?

I became obsessed. I started blogging daily, trying to recreate it. I read a dozen books on how to write (and hundreds of other books). I got into content marketing, and email marketing, and copywriting.

I’ve essentially built a career trying to answer that stupid question: How do you make someone want to read the next paragraph?

And I found the answer.

Except, it’s not one answer. Or even a set formula.

It turns out the master writers all use a handful of tools to get you hooked and keep you there. Here are 15 of them.

1. Write sober, edit drunk.

Yes, this is the opposite of what you normally hear. The point is you need to simplify your writing so even readers who are barely paying attention (which is most of them) can understand you.

If you can still grasp and enjoy your work when drunk, chances are your readers can, too.

Note: You do not have to actually drink. Editing when you’re tired or can’t think straight also works.

2. Tell readers you’ll tell them later.

If you want to keep someone hooked, tell them the thing they want is just around the corner. They only need to keep going a little bit further.

You see this in movies. (“How’d I end up here? It all started with…”)

You see this is presentations. (“Here’s what we’ll cover… we’ll get into that in a few minutes.”)

And you see this in blogs—I’ll do it in one of the later points.

Think of it like dangling a carrot in front of readers. Keep reading, and you just might get it!

3. Put the action first.

You’ll rarely see master writers publish a sentence like, “Because the economy has recently slowed down, it’s gotten tougher for B2B companies to close sales.”

Instead they’ll say, “Selling has gotten harder for B2B companies because the economy slowed down.”

The second example puts the action—the subject and verb—at the beginning rather than at the end. This usually simplifies, clarifies, and shortens your writing, so readers get through it faster and enjoy it more.

Take a look at this newsletter—almost every sentence does exactly that. And you’re still reading! Thank you, by the way.

4. Think beyond the hook.

You have to provide a hook that gets readers’ attention, but you can’t take that attention for granted. You have to fight to keep it.

This is a huge mindset shift for most of us. The other steps will give you more details to create the glue that makes readers stick around.

5. Use juxtaposition like salt.

People love contrasts. They make us stop, make us think, and even excite us. A few examples:

• Long sentences followed by short ones
• Refuting your last statement (you might think… but it’s not true)
• Describing opposites (newly hired, recently fired)
• Using a complex word in a paragraph of simple ones

Do this too much and readers will get exhausted, but a little makes your writing richer.

6. Cut this particular fluff.

The biggest difference between a master writer and a novice is their use of adjectives and adverbs.

Novices are thoroughly descriptive. Everything is grand, or terrible. They go over the top to make you feel something. Master writers just tell you what it is.

This is also the easiest step to implement: Review whatever you write, and delete the adjectives and adverbs. Your writing will instantly be easier to digest.

7. Don’t state the obvious.

Phrases like “as you know,” “obviously,” “of course,” and “as previously stated” are superfluous. If readers know, they know. You don’t need to tell them.

Sidebar: I’ve got a bone to pick with John Grisham. ~40 novels later, and he still says “As you know” in every chapter.

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