The Painting-Script-Story-Analysis

SCRIPT STORY ANALYSIS

TITLE  :  The Painting                 

DATE   :  02/19/2021  

AUTHOR :  sergio clemente

GENRE  :  Drama    

FORM   :  Script

PAGES  :  123 

SETTING:  New York/Los Angeles

PERIOD :  Nowadays

ELEMENTS: Star suggestion: 
Denzel Washington, Will Smith.
Director’s suggestion: none

ANALYST:  sergio clemente

PREMISE:  

A man dies on a park 
bench and discovers that "Death" 
is not just The End, but the 
beginning of a new stage. Follow 
Jesse Endlemory on this Journey 
to heal his life and free his soul.

This is an amazing story of a man 
who needs to go back to the place 
where he died to recover his soul. 
And in the middle of this search, 
Jesse Endlemory will find (Dead) 
people who are also fighting to 
save their souls.

The plot increases when Jesse find 
out that he can embodied live 
people. But it will have 
consequences for Jesse, because 
he shouldn't mess with live people.

Jesse Endlemory will be forced to 
review his life, diving deep into 
his soul to find the answers that 
will set him free. And "The Painting" 
on the wall can be the key to your 
freedom.

COMMERCIAL POTENTIAL:  

It’s have a lots of potential 
here with a low budget.

BUDGET:  Low     

*Reference values: Very High 
(410-210 Millions), High 
(200-100 Millions), Medium 
(90-50 Millions), Middle Medium 
(40-20 Millions), Low 
(10-01 Millions), Very Low 
(900-005 Thousand)*

PREMISE:  Excellent (9.60)

Is the premise strong enough 
for plot development?

STRUCTURE:  Great (9.50)

Does it adhere to the rules 
of three-act-structure?

PLOT: Excellent (9.60)

Is it full conflict? 
Complications? Major pitfalls?

CHARACTERS: Excellent (9.80)

Do the characters experience 
a wide range of emotions?

DIALOGUE:  Excellent (9.60)

Is it true-to-life?

DESCRIPTION: Excellent (9.60)

The writer is telling the 
story in a visual way?

STORY UNIQUENESS:  Excellent (9.60)

Way to tell the story - 
very original.

SETTING UNIQUENESS: Very Good (8.50)

Places where the story is told - 
very original.

FORMATTING:  Excellent (9.60)

Is the material presented in 
standard format: 12-point-courier 
or new courier?

*Reference values: Terrible 
(4.00 4.50), Bad (5.00 5.50), 
Regular (6.00 6.50), Good 
(7.00 7.50), Very Good 
(8.00 8.50), Great (9.00 9.50), 
Excellent (9.60 9.70 9.80 9.90 
10.00)*

PROJECT: Recommend

SCREENWRITER: Recommend

*Reference values: Pass 
(not approved), Consider 
(needs full reading), 
Recommend (approved)*

SCREENWRITER: Master

*Reference values: Master 
(Capacity: Unlimited. Skills: 
Adapt literary works, being 
able to specialize in 
biographies, epics or trilogies. 
Construction of dramatized idea 
scripts, and may also assume the 
role of Actor (Actress) and 
Director of the film. It can 
break paradigms, innovate, 
revolutionize)*

COMMENTS: 

I recommend this 
script because it has a low 
budget with the potential for 
large revenue; because the 
story is very well written 
with several surprise elements 
in the plot that can get the 
audience.

CHARACTERS: 

Jesse Endlemory, 
George Digfeel, Sam Sparrson, 
Sophia Sparrson, Olivia Howlyell, 
Mrs. Ruby Deelson, Frankie Volta, 
Billy Runless, Ted Vesselvino, 
Rob Clamwood, Artie, Marlow, 
Desdemona, Penelope Maria, 
Abbey Sandrine, Rosalind Mollow, 
Aaron Beston, Amanda Glessy, 
Josh Willeson, WOMAN#1, NUN#1, 
NUN#2, GUARD#1, GUARD#2, GIRL#1, 
GIRL#2, MAN#1, MAN#2, MAN#3, 
MAN#4, MAN#5, COP#1, COP#2, 
MAN#6 (Billy embodied), 
PEDESTRIAN#1.

IDEAL CAST:

JESSE ENDLEMORY: Keanu Reeves,
Will Smith, Cuba Gooding Jr.
Adam Sandler, Matt Damon, 
Brad Pitt, Idris Elba, 
Marlon Wayans.

GEORGE DIGFEEL: Denzel Washington, 
Tom Hanks, Christoph Waltz, 
Christopher Walken, 
Laurence Fishburne, 
Tommy Lee Jones, George Clooney,
Clint Eastwood.

SAM SPARRSON: Ashton Kutcher, 
Tobey Maguire.

SOPHIA SPARRSON: Mila Kunis, 
Reese Whitherspoon, 
Dakota Fanning.

OLIVIA HOWLYELL: Queen Latifah, 
Taraji P. Henson.

MRS. RUBY DEELSON: Oprah Winfrey, 
Whoopi Goldberg, Julie Andrews, 
Sally Field, Shirley Maclaine, 
Sônia Braga.

FRANKIE VOLTA: Ethan Hawke, 
Vince Vaughn, Owen Wilson.

BILLY RUNLESS: Ryan Gosling.

TED VESSELVINO: Martin Sensmeier.

ROB CLAMWOOD: Matthew Bomer. 

ARTIE: Male dog.

MARLOW: Male dog.

DESDEMONA: ZoE Kravitz, 
Halle Berry, Lupita Nyong’o.

PENELOPE MARIA: Eva Mendes.

AMANDA GLESSY: Rosario Dawson, 
Thandie Newton, Haley Bennett.

JOSH WILLESON: Cam Gigandet.

ABBEY SANDRINE: Not suggested.

ROSALIND MOLLOW: Not suggested.

AARON BESTON: Not suggested.

WOMAN#1, NUN#1, NUN#2, GUARD#1, 
GUARD#2, GIRL#1, GIRL#2, MAN#1, 
MAN#2, MAN#3, MAN#4, MAN#5, 
COP#1, COP#2, 
MAN#6 (Billy embodied), 
PEDESTRIAN#1: Not suggested.

“The Painting” 
by sergio clemente 
copyright wga.org 2098352/2021